a city meant to be fun'in
but not quite by fluke
She got covered in puke.
Typical story in Dublin
-Nancy-Anne McLaren
Lymricks are meant to be funny, silly, poems that don't have to 100% make sense. I think that this poem fits those categories. This poem alludes to the fact that people often get into the "drinking atmosphere" of Dublin, and in some cases may over expose themselves to alcohol. The rhyme scheme of all lymricks are AABBA. I chose to do a lymrick for this poem because they originated in Ireland and have a long history there.
Lymricks are meant to be funny, silly, poems that don't have to 100% make sense. I think that this poem fits those categories. This poem alludes to the fact that people often get into the "drinking atmosphere" of Dublin, and in some cases may over expose themselves to alcohol. The rhyme scheme of all lymricks are AABBA. I chose to do a lymrick for this poem because they originated in Ireland and have a long history there.
This is a great limerick, and by far the best of the ones from the class (yes that includes my norse limerick). It manages to capture the humor and mild obscenity (would that be obscenity? I don't know) that is necessary for a limerick. Great work.
ReplyDeleteits not obscenity chris, people puke all the time from drinking too much alcohol that no one even noticed that line until you pointed it out. anyways i really enjoyed your limerick nam, although the "fun'in" rhyme was a little sketchy you pulled it out in the end, good job!
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