Saturday, November 13, 2010

Concrete poem for the Mountains



This is a concrete poem. The simple consice sentence forms a picture of the mountains causing the reader to remember cold days skiing, playing in the snow, sledding, and other such memories. I wanted to make the readers remember the relief of finally coming indoors, taking off your wet winter clothing, and sitting down to a cup of hot chocolate; such an amazing feeling that I'm sure we've all experienced.  It is a hyperbole that the chapped lips can only be healed by a cup of coco, but when your that cold it certainly feels that way. This poem was the obvious choice for the month of December.

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